WRITE A LETTER OF APPLICATION TO THE TOURIST OFFICE

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...a weekend job as a local tour guide and i want to appy for that position. I’m a s...
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Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I’m'?
Suggestion: I’m
...ion. I’m a student of tourist school so i’m looking for a job that help me gain som...
^^^
Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... gain some expriments in my study fied. I also have a goal to become a profession...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l to become a professional tour guide. I think I can be a suitable candidate for...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...Quang city alone and surrounding areas. I also very active, outgoing and enjoying...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y I really good at talking with people. I have a big passion about touring so I r...
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Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I’m'?
Suggestion: I’m
...’s histories aren’t execption. Although i’m still a student, but I have some exprim...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, still, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51086956522 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60414004397 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6439387364 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4545454545 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0136217482553 0.244688304435 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00569222867901 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0180004075882 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00865002124569 0.151304729494 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149822762841 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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