Writing Task 2
Children should always follow their parents’ advice. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is no doubt that parents play an active role in bringing up their children. Therefore, some people think that children should always follow their parents’ advice; but others claim that it is not always right. In my point of view, children should follow their parents’ advice when they are young, but they should become independent and responsible when they get older.
To begin with, there are some reasons that children should obey their parents. First of all, parents are fulling-mature because they have more experience in life. Therefore, they would know what is better for their kids. Moreover, young children are innocent and they do not know the difference between right and wrong, and the parent is the best person who can teach them this. For example, a young child does not know how to behave properly and how it affects others. Therefore, parent should be the one who can talk to them friendly and give some wise advice. In addition, parents can also teach children how to protect themselves against dangers, both in the home and outside. For practical instance, a young girl wants to hang out with her friends at night but her mother forbids her because she knows how dangerous outside is at night, and her daughter does not know that.
However, when children get older, they should have a right to make their own decisions because they have more responsibility and become mature enough. The most noticeable reason is that parents' advice is not always proper. For example, a boy has a desire to become a singer while his parents want him to become a doctor. Parents sometimes want to tell their children how to live, but when they are grown-up, they can decide for themselves. If a child does not make their own decisions, he or she might grow up to be less independent and strong.
In conclusion, parents need to give young children advice on morals and safety, but not to control and tell them how to live when they get older.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79351032448 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37252146147 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501474926254 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1215155997 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5882352941 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246621376526 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957861509511 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669807529036 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167369994029 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737119438663 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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