Writing task 2 (an essay)
Internet contains a lot of information, however, sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today’s world, technology has changed human lives significantly. Many technological devices and systems have been invented in the last decade. The internet is one prevalent system that has improved our lives. Getting information through the internet is a very convenient way for updated news. However, some people say that the internet sometimes contains a lot of inaccurate information which is not a good source for getting information. The accuracy of information on the internet will be discussed carefully.
On the one hand, some people who assert that online information is not correct at all support that some documentaries are released by unreliable group of people or organizations, which contain wrong information. The media these days is very easy to access by everyone. People are able to share or send some information widespread through the internet. The misinterpretation and misinformation can easily happen. For example, some people mislead to present an interesting title of news which sometimes change meanings in different ways and make people to be more confused. The purpose of this intention is attraction many readers and advertisements. As a result, with the information from the internet, readers need to pay attention closely to contents and evaluate which is accurate or misinformation before belief.
On the other hand, some people argue that most of information on the internet is also accurate. This is because there are many good websites that are produced by reliable organizations. All news and information that comes from those websites always attaches with references that readers can search or check the content of information. Some documentary online are always base on the published information such as news or magazines. For instance, BBC news or The Reader’s Digest which are the popular news and magazine resources in the world, these contains all precise information which is already proved by scientists and edit by veterans. Therefore, a lot of information on some websites is more reliable and accurate for updating information.
To sum up with my opinion, both sides have pro and cons which is very hard to decide which side is over. However, I would like to disagree with this statement for a couple reasons. From my perspective, readers cannot be gullible or blamed that all the information on the internet is incorrect but they should be more aware that they have to consider carefully before totally belief any information.
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Comments
This is perfect eassy of high
This is perfect eassy of high band score.
The purpose of this intention is attraction many readers
The purpose of this intention is attracting many readers
The purpose of this intention is to attract many readers
Some documentary online are always base on the published information
Some documentaries online are always based on the published information
these contains all precise information
these contain all precise information
both sides have pro and cons which is very hard to decide
both sides have pro and cons which are very hard to decide
they have to consider carefully before totally belief any information.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
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Definitions of belief
noun
an acceptance that a statement is true or that something exists.
his belief in the value of hard work
trust, faith, or confidence in someone or something.
a belief in democratic politics
synonyms: faith, trust, reliance, confidence, credence
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 395 350
No. of Characters: 2044 1500
No. of Different Words: 204 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.458 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.175 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 52 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 8.265 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.318 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.473 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.064 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5