WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole.
What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Right now, scientists and tourists are able to travel to far natural environment for example the south pole. This essay will assess the advantages and disadvantages of the results from the progress of these travel.
To begin with, with the current advanced technology that humans have, they are able to traverse to the most remote environment around the world. This proven to be vital in modern world where studying the effects that global warming cause to environment might affect the survival of several species. For example, with the development of ships, many peoples can use it to wander around the world including the most remote areas such as south pole regions. In the past, it was thought that these changes will not ever happen. However, as technology and innovation progress, all those thought disappear throughout the time. As the result, now south pole has become base for many scientists in the world to study the effects of global warming to earth particularly antarctic and arctic region. Another point is, with advancement of technology, logistic routes to many remotes area become easier to be accessed. This is different compared to the past where logistic routes become factors to be considered if one want to send goods to remote areas such as scientific bases in antarctic region.
Despite the advantages of these development, many peoples still think that it is not relevant for them. In fact, without the discovery of ships and studies of natural phenomenon, we might not be able to live as comfortably as today. A strong evident could be found by looking at the creation of Suez canal in Africa for logistic routes. Back before Suez canal existed, merchants and ships needed to sail around the coastline of Africa continent to deliver goods to other places. This not only cost a lot of time but also the quality of the products reduced significantly. Fortunately, with the presence of Suez canal, sending goods become much faster compared than in the past while also maintaining the quality of the products. Another vital point is, although traveling to these part of the region become easier, not a lot of peoples are interested in it. Some of them ignore the results and only care for their own life.
To conclude, with the modernization of technology we are able to understand the cause and effects of problems in many aspects not only limited to environment or economic aspect. On the other hand, there are still a lot of peoples who believe that current development is not totally important at all which is why giving the right insight for them is the correct thing to make them realize that all efforts that has been done is crucial for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 865, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'remotes'' or 'remote's'?
Suggestion: remotes'; remote's
... of technology, logistic routes to many remotes area become easier to be accessed. This...
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Line 3, column 975, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to the past where logistic routes become factors to be considered if one want to ...
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Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this development' or 'these developments'?
Suggestion: this development; these developments
...c region. Despite the advantages of these development, many peoples still think that it is no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, while, as to, for example, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2239.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 454.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93171806167 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56789370729 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504405286344 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.9 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4066074487 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.95 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151429297641 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494167986785 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568105059434 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116831827266 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937280600231 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.