You have recently had a class discussion about the importance of taking care of your health. Now your English teacher has asked you to write an essay giving your opinions on the following statement:
It is more important to be healthy than to be rich.
From my perspective, these days, with the development of technology, the youngsters has more ambition to improve their lives as well as being rich, resulting in an increase in having a tendency to consider wealthy is more valuable than healthy. However, when they grow up and gradually get old, they will change their minds and recognise that healthy is the most important things in life.
To start with, with a good health, you have the ability to achieve a mixed variety of success in your career, giving rise in the number of the successful in life. Accordingly, it is one of the most contributing factors in financial development. The healthier you get, the more success you have. On the contrary, without healthy, you can do nothing.
To the best of my knowledge, healthy brings about happiness in life. It is clear that suffering from illness prevent you from many happy moments. To be more specific, Covid-19 pandemic is an obvious evidence. It limits most of our activities, makes a seriously negative effect on our health, leading to the dramatically increasing of patient death all over the world.
In conclusion, I believe that the benefits of being healthy outweigh the benefits of being rich, and I hope that it will enable you to aware of healthy's value in life-happy approaching.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g a tendency to consider wealthy is more valuable than healthy. However, when the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, however, if, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94520547945 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77446770109 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607305936073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1660001146 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4545454545 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270654803161 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882459262798 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594753302402 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146741491967 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310922842797 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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