You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
It is common for richer nations usually donate their budget to poorer nations. However, it does not resolve the problem. As a result, developed countries should provide another solution to help the poor instead of financial support. From my point of view, I partly agree with this statement since the poor need money to solve their issues first and giving education opportunities should be a vital element in encouraging poor people to overcome their difficulties.
On the one hand, a financial help from developed nations will contribute to heal the vulnerabilities of poor nations.The developing countries would have more chances to use this support to solve most reality problems that their people are facing. For example, during the covid-19, Vietnamese had been suffering from dying without curing, low of food stocks. Thanks to the vaccination kit test and food supplies from America, Vietnam government could prevent the number of death people, also have food sources to send for every citizen living in distance.
Another solution to aid the poverty in poor nations is that rich nations should send more teachers to these areas to improve the knowledge of people. A nation with well-educated citizens will be the first step to evolve. As a result, by the number of workforces that having knowledge and motivation, they can contribute to not only enhance the growth of economics, finances, and other industries but also increase the revenue and positions of their own countries in the world. For instance, North Korea used to be a place where people living there didn't have literacy. After that, South Korea sent their teacher to teach basic knowledge for Northern Korean. Their efforts impacted on the way Northern Korean understood the right that they deserved, provide more chances to cultural socialization
To sum up, I think that the poverty of poor countries could not be solved simply by money from rich countries, but it needs more efforts in education element to minimize. Therefore, developed nations should help both from financial factor and giving educational opportunities to help the poor
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21994134897 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67899437506 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551319648094 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9963009349 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.142857143 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237130193555 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818629693904 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085293135997 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171577416297 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083228854629 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.