You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
In some nations, average body weight is rising while fitness levels and health are declining. So, we will together discuss the reasons of these issues and find solutions could be possible to solve them.
As we known, there are many causes making human's health and fitness decrease. First reason is laziness, they always busy with their works and may be have different activities, so they don't have much time to take care of themselves such as eat balanced meal, do excersise and relax after eating. Another cause is related to balanced meal which contains of full vitamins, protein, nutrients food. Nowadays, people tend to go out and eat at fast food store, restaurant, they don't want to cook at home instead of spending little money to eat out because they feel it not only convenient but also more delicious. For instance, instead of eating a bread and drink milk in the morning, they will eat hamburger or fast food to go early for works or go to school, this result in going up weight.
However, there are still many ways by which we can reduce the overweight and problem relevant to health of people. Firstly, we can change meal menu and choose the dishes which bring more energy as well as good for health such as beef, vegetables, fruits, eggs, fish. Moreover, we should stop eating the foods having much fatty acid, sweety and using alcohol, stimulant. Secondly, spending time as much as possible to do excersise, go jogging or participate in outside activities with friends, it will help us feel relax, happier and improve our health better. For example, we can enjoy the fresh air in local park, the places where the trees are built around or if we have much money, we can travel to which we like and having a great vacation with our friends or family.
In conclusion, the level of health and fitness of people is decreasing by many reasons but we can reduce and solve them. From my point of view, people can lose weight and improve their health by modern equipment as long as they attempt in their best.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69382022472 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2860733772 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578651685393 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3254041457 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.357142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152920057611 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658405731213 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546866060369 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12376993649 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652678150837 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.