You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
In the contemporary era, with under the law each person in society has a same rights.This rights covers to such as an education life ,health or accommodation.According to this regulation each person can be apply to higher education instution if they want.
Initially,in the modern world gradugated from universties is not compulsory for everyone.If the students want continue to their education life then he or she should apply for this kind of foundation.However,the universities should doesn't have to be rule for selecting equal sex.They should electing to prospective to student as a equally for both female and males.But,due to the some kind of specesific reasons according to student sex student interest can be different.For example for engineering degree classes students who are applying can be male 75% and just 15% female.While accepting to student for new semester they should choice to regardless sex.The vital point is should be student academic background,social life or could be their goals.
Secondly,restriction due the gender is not fair for all kind of students.The education insutitions should be gave same opportunity for everyone.However,if the schools can be arrange to expands to classrom for both male and female students and be able to take accepting to children as a equal.Such as demands one specific class could be high from girls.And If the girls student want to improve theirselves in this subject all class students could be a girl.If this students accepting in law and regulation to education system their is nothing to wrong.
Eventually,according to my opinion supporting and encourage the all kind of gender student is main point.Education instution should elect to people relevant to their capacity,ability or their academic successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46014492754 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.69639627348 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.35085659 49.4020404114 446% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 376.75 106.682146367 353% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.0 20.7667163134 332% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.5 7.06120827912 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194634870175 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109367152985 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764620910174 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109367152985 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764620910174 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.8 13.0946893788 296% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.02 50.2224549098 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.57 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.