You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Competition and co-operation are two sides of a coin, which both are essential to learning for children in different stages of life. While many people believe that children should be engaged in competition, others keep the notion that helping each other is more important to compete in children's life. In my opinion, I consider whether to compete or co-operate depend on the age of the child.
On one hand, a major share of people believe in the idea of helping each other in children is essential to learn the life lesson. The main reason behind this side of thought is that as humans, we do not live alone. We are living in an environment where we are surrounded by our family, friends, neighbors, and so on. Therefore, it is very important to learn how to live, communicate and interact with everyone from early life. Besides, co-operation will help them to negotiate the confrontation, which they may encounter every day later in life, and thus come to a solution. Hence, co-operation has a profound positive effect on young children from grade kindergarten to five (age 0 to 10)
On the other hand, competition can channel the future success of children appropriately. When children are encouraged to compete with each other in different areas like academics and sports, they will completely apply themselves. This, in turn, can have a very good outcome which will inspire them further. Moreover, proper and healthy competition will make them ready to enter into a competitive future career as an adult. Therefore, for older children (age 11 to 17) it is important to compete.
In my opinion, I believe whether to compete or co-operate depends on the age of the children. In the early life of development, children need to learn the essential life skills through co-operation whereas later in life, they can focus more on competition to excel in their academics and other essential skills. This way, their learning, and achievement will be more balanced.
In conclusion, despite people having a different opinion about whether children should learn co-operation or competition, I am in favor of learning both skills at different stages of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03351955307 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87150294545 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505586592179 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5595735327 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0588235294 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269390343908 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926694799193 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707978851182 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174377307347 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611407217634 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.