You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole.
What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
In the contemporary world with the technology and modern sciene everything can became more reachable and easy for humans.For example, travel to long distance and rough places are now became a more choosen places.Like a South Pole which is the cold and difficult area for individuals.
With the this possibility to rough places such as a South,North Pole or Amazon Forest can help to human race for discover the new creature or understand the world rules like a magnestism.These are obviously positive effects the this developments.And also, reaching this places easly vital for animals and plants which are living in this zones.Following the this animals or plants can show us the their life circle or how is going on this circle.They could be have trouble for their next generations.
However, opposite the this positive asides also have negatives.Going to this nature and making observe or arrange trip for tourist cause to distort this areas nature life.All people are not have the same education.Hence,end of the this explorations and trips can cause pollutions for this wild life.If this happens, cause the maybe effects all savage life .And can cause vital results as a badly for next years to our world.
On the other hands,if the regulations by make with the goverments hands nature and wild life can prevent the distort and polutions.With this way when scientists can make their research also tourist trips can be sustainable with under some rules.This should be better for everyone and every creature.Eventually,this places are belong to this savage animals and plants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20703125 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15388747827 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55078125 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.0138437237 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 333.25 106.682146367 312% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.0 20.7667163134 308% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.5 7.06120827912 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226396292867 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140700381811 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413717456287 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140700381811 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413717456287 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.1 13.0946893788 268% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.52 50.2224549098 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.