Young couples nowadays prefer to have fewer children than the previous generation. Most of them prefer to accomplish other goals in their life first. Is this a positive or negative development?
In contrary to our ancestors, desiring to have more offspring, current parents for fulfilling and acquiring their targets procrastinate or balk at procreation more children. It will bring some issues per se, which will be discussed succinctly.
On the one hand, some are of the opinion that a child is a boon bestowed by God. First and foremost, should a society do not attend to even out between the natality and casualty, sooner or later, they will face some tribulations precluding them from reaching their short- and long-term goals. For example, with the annihilation in birth rate, their nation will be threatened by alienate countries (whether political or economic), and if they fall through in this vying, they will be deprived of reaching their targets. Moreover, in the impending future, our posterity is not able to enjoy from going through having aunt and uncle, accordingly giving rise to the influence on all zeniths and nadirs of their feel.
Meanwhile, with afoot progression and augmentation in societies, human beings are facing with miscellaneous upheaval-causing problems, intuitively believing to fulfill their desiderata initially. Firstly, needless to say, people are experiencing galloping inflation, emanating parents in the incipient of their life refute to bring up some children thanks to some pecuniary problems that will irrefutably occur. Furthermore, it seems some parents, as they were not compliant children and did not attend to their filial responsibility they believe their offspring would not be able to unravel any problem for them. To this end, being of them is futile.
To recapitulate, notwithstanding the puerile credence in the latter paragraph is superficially attractive, the lack of having enough descendant is untenable. Children can not merely play a crucial role in accomplishing our long-term goals but also be deemed as a bastion of our country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40268456376 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06982242781 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627516778523 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8835409249 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.166666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134417210451 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503116194465 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030822819965 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802453367695 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192213044814 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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