Young generations prefer to marry and have children when they become 30 and above ,and they no longer start their marriage and family life at a young age. Do you agree with this?
The youth of today would rather get married and plan to start a family in their thirties; they do not take marriage decision at an early age. I strongly hold the view that young couples should delay their marriage and childbirth until they enter the fourth decade of their life . this essay will consider two reasons for this trend below.
To begin with, financial security is considered to be the first reason why people in the twenties do not get married ; young men and women usually work a lot of time to secure financial stability because they are aware of the amount of money that is needed for their new life. For example, an American study manifests that 73% of couples who decided to get married after they had become thirty or above are professionally stable, and they own their house . Hence, this will have a significant impact on their future offspring ; they will have their juniors educated well.
In addition to that, youngsters are in need to gain life experiences before they involved in having children. Exercising maturity will make newlyweds lead a content life ,therefore, they will instill moral values and ethics in their sons and daughters. To give a clear example, per a Ted talk , most spouses who are in thirties will have psychologically stable children, and those upcoming infants will be socially successful because they will be raised mature parents.
In conclusion, not only does delaying marriage after the age of thirty influence husbands and wives positively, but it also has a massive impact on their future offspring. As a result, I would like to re-emphasize my stance that people who are getting married at an old age become successful parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92631578947 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57333809779 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2909658904 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.636363636 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345038158596 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131593531217 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601871399531 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207360976864 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850598218235 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.