Young people are often influenced by "peer pressure". Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?
In this day and age, young people are affected by negative emotions, which is starting from the same age people who are feeling about peer pressure. It is not denied that the appearance of companion in our life that could be not indispensable so that is motivated towards competitive in both benefits. Looking from an overall perspective, ignoring any of detrimental to their spiritual, they will attain some of the benefits of this matter.
Concerning the peers, mutually-aid in each person which is foster to be a person well-trained and skills. Indeed, in school, children tend to intimate others same ages for those are who talented with a certain subject. How about at gained the highest score as same as an excellent person, whereby, they strives on to doing that by methods like more hard-working studied or asked those assist them. What’s about career, employee or workers always expects to get more wage that permitted them to purchase what they desire, so that, they will more perform to their ability in the scope of work, as a result, they will be working better than others. Based on the pressure, the production will be getting more ever.
On the other hand, peer pressure is a human instinct that people are likely to resist or defeat on their failures and moving forwards. What it meant that people facing a risk of the situation, as such as caught in the act of drug abuse or theft of goods in the supermarket by pressure from friends, in this case, friends will be standing out with them and encouraged to overcome these that they don’t aware of against this feeling by the way. It leads to spreading out the positive signs to the community.
In conclusion, peer pressure looked at the sake of this, if we recognise out of matters that this brought back. We will learn how to be a person be better with reliance on the competition with friends or colleagues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 405, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...al to their spiritual, they will attain some of the benefits of this matter. Concerning t...
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Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a talented'.
Suggestion: who is a talented
...intimate others same ages for those are who talented with a certain subject. How about at ga...
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Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'strive'
Suggestion: strive
...e as an excellent person, whereby, they strives on to doing that by methods like more h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75914634146 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56815920483 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557926829268 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8276950703 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0997761422821 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368004357579 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553607167213 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690367401867 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378638021856 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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