young people inn the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation.
Why is this the case?
What impact dose this have on the relationship between old and young people?
A vast number of animal species are at high risk of extinction due to human activities, with countless incidents both on land and in the sea. there are several reasons causing such heedless actions, following with solutions to conserve the animals and alleviate the loss.
First of all, some factors in charge of the deaths of animals vary from land to the ocean. Terrestrial animals being hunt down usually because of the heedless people craving for accommodations and cultivation lands have deforested enormous forests which are home to thousands of species. The demand for food sources should be taken into consideration due to the population keeps rising desperately. However, unlike land animals, seafood is targeted by humans, therefore they keep killing fish and aquatic creatures for their fresh and precious meat. sea trashes are also harmful and can be stuck inside the throat of the animal, consequently, it will end up killing that animal by blocking the oxygen needed for respiratory.
In order to protect the animals, there are many solutions to consider. there are many alternative solvents for the problem related to loads of people, which can tremendously reduce deforestation and food supplies such as high buildings, organic and vegetarian meals and so on. The most crucial part of conserving the habitats is via raising social awareness by boycotting the communities that overdoing animal hunting regardless of the result that cannot be undone. Furthermore, by using social media to enhance the self-awareness and create enough impact to society.
In general, killing animals must be under careful observation to avoid destroying the hole biohazard. it is is the responsibility of every resident to properly behave towards the environment to create a better world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
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Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put before the verb 'down'.
Suggestion: usually down
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Suggestion: Sea
...ures for their fresh and precious meat. sea trashes are also harmful and can be stu...
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Suggestion: There
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Suggestion: It
...to avoid destroying the hole biohazard. it is is the responsibility of every resid...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...avoid destroying the hole biohazard. it is is the responsibility of every resident to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, so, therefore, in general, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36749116608 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87616446709 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643109540636 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9348607292 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0279836440872 0.244688304435 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00958049152257 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0206059994493 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0145455352364 0.151304729494 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112216139029 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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