Young people today spend too much money and time following fashion trend (clothing, tech) .To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As the widespread of the Internet, people can catch up with the trend easily especially young people. They spend a large amount of time and money on clothing, tech, cosmetic, etc. Some people claim that paying out of money and time in fashion trend help them more fashionable. Others think that they are wasting their money for shopping trendy clothes. From my point of view, I strongly believe that fashion just take too much money and time from people.
On the one hand, following the trend help people more fashionable and self-confident. This perspective is necessary for celebrities and businessman due to they have to appear in front of many people and stylish clothes help them smarter in others' eyes. Moreover, many people measuring other people by their physical appearance. For instance, people who wearing street fashion can be seen as the people who keen on hip-hop or people who wearing a smart suit can be managers or sealers.
On the other hand, fashion trend is changing by the time due to the interest of people and it is a natural variation. Following this trend can cost enormously money if young people try to catching up with this dynamic procedure like famous person on the screen. Despite modern clothes make them younger and fresher, it go out of fashion really quick and people start to eliminate them. Continuing wearing these clothes instead making the youth look cooler; they make them look weird because trending fashion has unique style that will not last for long time. Additionally, wearing what make people confident and comfortable is better than copying famous people pattern. Popular clothes may not fit with their body and manner and they will make them silly.
In conclusion, although running with fashion trend will make young people look fresher and show them is not far behind the trend with other people, it will cost a large amount of fortune and time if they keep focus to this instead of wearing freely and comfortable.
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| 2020-07-04 | Minh Hoang Duy | 73 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, moreover, really, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91591591592 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3937531992 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4018013611 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303220309411 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113225896161 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048855493005 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195147518003 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647914986921 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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