As transportation industry has a particular importance in modern life, over the past centuries a great deal of research has been done to improve the transportation system. These evaluations cause to some considerable development that make the freight easier. Meanwhile, I think the most significant innovation is the invention and development of planes.
Something that should be stick in mind, is the variety of transportation system. For example different kind of car, trains or ships have been spread all around the world and people have used them base on their needs. But what is important is about the role and importance of modern transportation vehicles which are included metro, subway, monorail, high speed trains and airplanes. Among these facility, plane is the most efficient vehicle. The applied innovation in plan is really incredible. Flying a massive vehicle in the sky inspired by birds flying mechanism is the most significant invention of human during the last decades.
Also, transporting by plan brought out several advantages. It make the time of traveling as less as possible and it’s rather safer in comparison with road transportation system. Moreover, travelling by plan is very comfortable and help people to get to their destination with the least trouble. Despite this, freighting by plan result in more cost. Because manufacturing and maintenance of this kind of equipment needs a systematic organization and also trained human resource.
As a conclusion and by considering all things, it seems that plan manufacturing and using of plan in transportation system is one the most significant invention of human. This innovation help people to level up and improve their life situation and had led to facilitate life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stuck'?
Suggestion: stuck
... of planes. Something that should be stick in mind, is the variety of transportati...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this facility' or 'these facilities'?
Suggestion: this facility; these facilities
... high speed trains and airplanes. Among these facility, plane is the most efficient vehicle. T...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...plan brought out several advantages. It make the time of traveling as less as possib...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
.... It make the time of traveling as less as possible and it's rather safer in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, while, for example, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38043478261 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13060880823 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3271291285 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21083168648 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627322979092 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551332526526 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133171592637 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647122694179 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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