Nowadays, many families have both parent working. Some working parents believe other family member like grandparents can take of their children, while others think childcare provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Present contemporary lifestyle required both mother and father work to afford their expenses. This alarming trend cause different view about whether children should be sent to childcare organization or be looked after by a family member. I would argue that a close member of family would be the better choice.
On the one hand, nowadays, there are a huge number of those childcare center that are designed to provide kids with all the care and training they may need. They are equipped not only with all essential facilities such as beds or toys but also with a wide range of educational tools and well-trained tutors. Many knowledgeable nurses are working in these organizations to offer a complete package of children. For example, when a child injured himself, the staff can react quickly and give him first aid. Another benefit that is worth to mention is the appropriate atmosphere that is created in these centers. Children are able to make friend and enhance their interpersonal interactions which make a great contribution to their personality development and promote their communication abilities.
By contrast, however, when children are supposed to be cared by a family member, for example grandparents, the associated benefits are more significant. First of all, the love and affection that a child will receive from a member with blood connection play a vital role in creating a safe and warm atmosphere where not only kids but also parents, while they are at work, can be ensure and feel certain. Take a disable or sick child as an example. Grandparents or another member such as uncle or aunt are more likely to be patient or responsible to do their best. Secondly, the grandparents have many years of experience. They have brought up their offspring, possibly, they are able to raise their grandchildren as well. Finally, caring of children at home and by a family member cause them to be more family-oriented and appreciate the value of family.
In conclusion, while there are some possibly perks of sending children to childcare centers, I believe they should be raised by their own grandparents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this childcare' or 'those childcares'?
Suggestion: this childcare; those childcares
...d, nowadays, there are a huge number of those childcare center that are designed to provide kid...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...k, can be ensure and feel certain. Take a disable or sick child as an example. Grandparen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07428571429 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90987902126 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582857142857 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7062375662 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.470588235 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274240292617 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814076818533 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448327671198 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162688292841 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403728852585 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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