In your opinion, why is the circus still a popular form of entertainment in the modern electronic age?
Nowadays, there a wide range of entertaining programs such as TV shows, a large amount of concerts, games, movies and theaters, different kind of art gallery, public matches, sport competition and ect. In fact, according to age and taste of individuals, there are so many options and people can chose anything that they prefer to do in their free time. It’s interesting to say that among these verity, circus is still one of the first priority of considerable portion of people. In my idea, there is a couple of main reasons that people are keen on circus.
First of all, circus is consist not only talented human, but also there are different kind of talented and trained animals in circus group. Watching animal that are performing with humans is exciting and sometimes surprising, especially for kids. Shows on circus are live and people watch the actors alive. Also, most of the programs are kind of weird and exiting. For example when people can watch a lion jumping through a flaming hoop or a person who walk on the rope at height, it cause to adrenaline gets free in body which result in pleasure and enjoyments.
On the other hand, circus always are performing in special places. The decoration of exhibitions are very different and interesting. In comparison to other entertainment, for examples movies that are in the same place with specific rules, the place of circus are so amazing and can attract people attention. During the last decades, the decoration and all equipment that are used in circus have been developed and are more entertaining in comparison to the old circus which ultimate to increasing the popularity of that. Moreover, musical performance of clowns or those surprise that jugglers shows in front of spectators eyes, will be memorable for all people.
Considering all things, it’s very personal to choose an entertainment for free time, but according to people opinion, it’s obviously clear that circus is still one of the most popular entertainment among people in all ages. The verity of programs which are performing by animal and humans bring out lots of pleasures and people really enjoy to watch them. Also, amazing decoration and the place of circus is very impressive that can attract peoples’ attention. It seems that circus will be amazing for ongoing years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, still, for example, in fact, kind of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04404145078 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71198485901 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520725388601 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4891828386 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159312291466 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489991477955 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050227100246 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102262394378 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343223784482 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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