In this contemporary era, there is plethora sources of entertainment on which innumerable entertaining shows are telecasted, enabling the one to choose of their own interest. But, the circus is still very popular among modern people of all age groups. In my opinion, circus is the best way to entertain the people and I have explained my reasons for it in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Predominantly, in a circus show, trained humans performs stunts with their trained animals, which is worthseeing. There are numerous stunts and acts performed by them, which people find very exciting. For example, no one can imagine a lion jumping through a burning hoop or a person walking on a rope. Also, it is very interesting to observe a juggler doing trivial juggling. Moreover, talented persons jump from a height where a normal person is afraid to reach. Thus, there are many perilous activities which make circus more popular among masses.
Secondly, the decorations and visuals of circus are unique, realistic and charming. These decorations attract people towards them rapidly. For example, all the decorations and visuals in the movies are not real but are created by using VFX or 3-Dimemsional imaging. That is why, it is very interesting to watch everything live. Moreover, circus is always performed in an open area under the sky where clowns performs with their musical instruments. Thus, people are very interesting in watching circus.
To recapitulate, circus is popular among communities as they serve the community with real stunts which are actually very entertaining.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24110671937 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90633999509 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584980237154 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4243711389 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172588155064 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055550391946 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745625455481 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1150070725 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927118994411 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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