1. Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly. Why is it? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In this modern era, thanks to the cutting-edge technological advancements, availability of commodities and things has become more and more easier rather than previous decades, and this result in a new approach among people and they want their desired things as soon as possible. This alarming trend possesses several potential reasons. Despite some associated perks, this phenomenon is negative due some major drawbacks.
To begin with, there are two main explanation for this tendency. First of all, in comparison to pervious decades, mass production of commodities has grown significantly which result in easy and constant access of people to their basic and daily need such as food staple or cloths. These available facilities might put people at ease and they get used to this situation. Secondly, people, especially young generation, used to compare themselves with celebrities who share their life on social media websites, and not only they tempted to have a similar lifestyle but also they want have all belongings instantly. Imagine those teenagers who do not have adequate education or skills or money. Once they watch a celebrity video on YouTube, they might be eager to experience those things.
Turning to possible effects, despite some potential benefits such as motivating people to put their effort to achieve their goals, this trend is a negative development. Perhaps the main drawback would be inappropriate preparation for achieving a target. For example, a young business man who wants to make a hug profit in a short period of time after launching his business without doing enough advertising or gaining experience or having financial supports. In this situation, the risk of failure would be considerably high. Furthermore, when people are not able to achieve their targets, they may be disappointment and loss their confidence. In the long-term, the high proportion of society consist of people with low self-esteem which causes weak parents.
In conclusion, based on above-mentioned explanation, some underlying reasons are behind this social phenomenon like the influence of either social media or available and low-priced products. Nevertheless, due to some major negative results like failures, both people and society might encounter with problems in the long-run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...modities and things has become more and more easier rather than previous decades, and this ...
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Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is result in a new approach among people and they want their desired things as so...
^^
Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...o wants to make a hug profit in a short period of time after launching his business without do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47471910112 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96302781528 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601123595506 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0629513693 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.647058824 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125025162045 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035261829315 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437736814198 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077936292142 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044984283308 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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