100 years ago, traveling by ship took weeks. Nowadays, developments in aviation mean that people can travel the same distance in hours.
Earlier people had to undergo discomforts and seasickness to travel from one part to another part of the world but now traveling time has drastically reduced due to advancements in airplane technology. Navigating on an airplane is preferred over voyaging in a ship as traveling in an aircraft is far more convenient, comfortable and quick.
Airplane journies are way convenient and comfortable than ship journies. Passengers might feel several jerks during an air flight but those jerks occur only at the time of takeoff and landing only but in case of ships, the journey is full of turns and jerks. Nowadays, airlines have included many services to enhance the experience of their customers. Every aircraft is now equipped with facilities such as wireless fidelity, television screens, pubs, eateries etcetera.
Furthermore, the duration of travel time is way less in case of air flight which makes it more favorable in case you have an urgent situation. For example, if you have an ailing relative or an urgent meeting and so on. Airplanes give a sigh of relief in such a situation. Additionally, flights make a holiday worth enjoying for a greater duration than ships do.
Also, seasickness is more prevalent among travelers than air sickness as very few cases of air sickness are noted than seasickness. Seasickness can last for weeks whereas air sickness lasts only for a few hours.
However, air-tickets can be much more expensive than the voyage tickets, at least fifty percent more expensive.
To conclude, it is common to view that aviation makes traveling much more convenient, comfortable and rapid. Despite the expenses, the merits of air flights are much more important than sea voyages.
- Currently, there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 56
- In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend? 56
- With the advance in modern technology, people are becoming more socially disconnected. At what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- 100 years ago traveling by ship took weeks Nowadays developments in aviation mean that people can travel the same distance in hours 89
- There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays? 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 353, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...ance the experience of their customers. Every aircraft is now equipped with facilitie...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... much more important than sea voyages.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, at least, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15467625899 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84312869519 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2533090427 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12770263047 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432286902235 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412377652762 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669117109049 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426239155364 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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