1. Some people believe that it is important to give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Presents are a token of love and affection to loved ones and family members. Certain individuals agree to the statement that giving gifts to their family members and loved ones is an emotional outlet to express r care, whereas, others believe that there are different other ways to show their liking and concerns. In my opinion, I do believe that people can convey their affection and consideration in a plethora of different ways.
On the one hand, a certain set of people give their consent that the best way to express their warmth and sympathy for someone is by helping them both psychologically and financially as well as compassionately caring for them in their difficult times as this will have a deeper impact and will be treasured for life. To be more precise, Expensive gifts and presents have limited shelf life and do not symbolize true feelings. To elucidate, if a person who is in a big financial crisis, helping them monetarily and supporting them during their hardships is the best way to express the care and affection
On the other hand, several people believe that giving gifts is the most significant way of showing their deep affection and fondness. Simply stating, gifts are tangible and will persistently remind them about the true feeling and sentiments. Moreover, to surprise someone on special occasions with a gift one requires for a very long time will be appreciated and adored. To illustrate, if a child is gifted a bicycle on his birthday, he will remember and love that gift for lifetime.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that to help someone in difficult times or to take care and express the love to a person in need is the best way of expressing affection and true feeling, moreover it will be appreciated and remembered for entire life
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...preciated and remembered for entire life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, whereas, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85855263158 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75600381828 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.5006285692 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.7 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229481842728 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937445514038 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793248971046 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143934634067 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589041506614 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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