In today's society, many fathers are choosing to be househusbands, while the mothers are taking up the duties of the breadwinner in the family. I think this is a positive change and will discuss the reasons in this essay.
With the equal rights movement coming into place and many more women being well established in their careers, it has now become socially acceptable for men to take up the role of a househusband. Many men are also choosing professions such as teachers, cooks, childcare providers, nurses, etc which have been traditionally held by women. Unlike olden times, men are also actively participating in household chores. Many men enjoy being "stay at home" fathers, which gives them a sense of accomplishment.
In my opinion, this is surely a positive development. This leads to an equal society, where women can be more independent and career-focused. They do not have to live under pressure to sacrifice their careers, because of children, as it is the equal responsibility of both the parents to raise the kids. In many families, both the husband and wife opt to work, which can compensate for the higher cost of living. In situations where the wife earns more money or has better opportunities, many men are choosing to be "stay at home" fathers.
In conclusion, fathers choosing to be househusbands is a positive development, as it not only helps society to be equal but also encourages women to be much more independent and career-oriented, and also help the children to grow up in a better environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...be 'stay at home' fathers. In conclusion, fathers choosing to be hous...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.046692607 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14994904535 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556420233463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0931030166 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.083333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247697048509 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902777613155 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514407366054 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16130596879 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543550563076 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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