Advantage and disadvantage of work or travel of a year between finishing high school and starting university study for young people
In the one hand it is nice to let young people work or travel of a year after they finishing their high school it can help them learn something that never teach on school and sure thing they got new experience. As matter of fact as we know that experience more important than some diploma or certificate because we need to see how far they can do their responsibility. And about responsibility you got it when you getting older.
In the other side, after work or travel of a year I think young people are going lazy to back to study because they were falling in love to make money or throw money around by travel, not enough of spending money young people start to think that university is just killing time due to the main purpose after study in university is about making money so they think why don’t we making money from now on.
It is important to create bright future for young people as the next generation, however as a student that ever work and travel before going to university I think its better to go to university after finishing high school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by travel, not enough of spending money young people start to think that univers...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44102564103 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39606295529 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579487179487 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.939984062 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.2 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337006478315 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157541438384 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133128233479 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229559983639 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651260446799 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 11.3001002004 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 78.4519038076 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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