It is an obvious truth that educating in aboard is accompanied by numerous merits and demerits.
Some people claim that going to foreign countries can lead to many advantages whilst other strongly think vice versa.
Those people who are in favour of emigrating to aboard argue that, almost everybody can be benefited from going to foreign countries. The most crucial advantages of that is related to getting familiar with different cultures. As a matter of fact, a different attitude to some items including, saying praying, table manner and so forth so on can be witnessed in unlike countries. For example, it is not customary to hug people in some countries. So, you will learn to adopt yourself with variety of items that can contribute to being more successful in your social life. In addition, a huge number of facilities are existed in foreign countries that might people suffer from lack of them in their hometown. As they are more developed, they are more in contact with the latest version of everything that makes living easier. That is why some people support emigrating.
However, people who oppose to going aboard worry about negative effects that immigration can bring with itself. One of the major problems with that is about getting homesick. some people can not tolerate being far from their family and their friends as well. In other words, they are so dependent to family and when they go to somewhere else expect their country can not deal with problems efficiently. Moreover some of them get cultural shock when they face with different cultures and they found everything cumbersome to be addressed. So, they are against and feel it is better for people stay in their countries.
In conclusion, going to aboard deals with arguments for and against. some people prefer to see the bright side of that like getting familiar with different cultures and having more welfare whilst other see the other side of the coin and remain against.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97568389058 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48414378302 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507598784195 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5998422108 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9444444444 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0201090772882 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00896416679646 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256691395474 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0179344425344 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266353589587 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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