Advertisement influences people to buy product. Do you agree or disagree?
“What really decided consumers to buy or not to buy is the content of advertising, not its form.” I believe that advertising play a very big role. advertisements not only influences but also induces people to buy the product.
advertisements make people know about the product. product’s features, quality and price is known to the consumer well in advance. I do not agree with the people saying that advertising induces or encourages people to buy the product they don’t need.
some Brand Ambassadors play a major role while advertising certain products. they include Actors and Actresses like Amitabh Bachan, Akshay Kumar and many more to name them. they inform us as well as intimate us the use, quality and price of the product, by portraying example of it which helps one in buying right product from the right place.
people tend to get confused regarding which product to buy, advertisement makes it easier. An example can be an advertisement of Sanitary pads, portrayed by Akshay Kumar is a very great idea to spread message to the people in villages, who are unaware of its uses. people may be known about the advantages and disadvantages of certain product with the help of advertisements.
Another example can be of packed foods available in grocery stores, this has helped many busy parents. they can just handover such packed foods to their children as a lunch. A very high quality food is served by a grocery stores.
To Conclude, advertisement helps in generating more revenue. it also helps people around the world to buy best product from the variety of choices available. it saves time of people who are working as well as non-workers. advertisement has proven to be the best source for product Development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, really, regarding, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10652920962 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90804907935 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539518900344 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8236119231 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5555555556 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374112344868 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128560146231 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125904444799 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204835647339 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126172600637 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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