Current days advertising playing vital role for every companies it is fact that individuals are very encouraged by advertise. I think this trend has more positive impact rather than negative effect. This are explained in this paragraph along with my point of view.
First of all the most general good part of advertising is spread awareness to customer this mean that all companies announcing their product by showing new features and function also few of them compare products with other brands. This will be helped to Civilians to understand product is value for money or not an example for this Samsung mobile phone company always target iphone by showing variety of futures.
Beside this it is also true that more cheaper goods available as compared to past.To elaborate,for publiCity brand sale product in low rate also including special offer. So most of people can afford them products.
On the contrary this influence has a negative effect the foremost is change mentality of individual. This is because the way of advertising is unique but they putting unrealistic views and activities. This would be encouraged children and youth to do practical stunts at home through the situation may put people lives in hazard. For instance energy drink advertise display high level students are completed after drink it.
In conclusion,this discussion finally say that some advertising is dangerous for children make bed impact however this helps in awareness and improve new functionality and futures
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, may, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27385892116 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72503877624 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684647302905 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5868972376 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.916666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257078902108 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939213398629 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781272119106 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130593538025 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663907957293 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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