All over the world people spend more time on sports and exercises these days. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages? Give your opinion with supporting examples from your own experience.
Human are living more enjpyable on doing exercies and play sports worldwide. People may have different perspectives regarding to whether this new. Trend would bring positive or negative effects on society. I, in my point of view, strongly stand for this healthy tendency.
Playing any kind of sports , indeed, has long been proven to be beneficial for human health. The more time we spend an excerise, the better outcome we are able to achieve. This is considered as long term result which would, definitely, lead to tremendous reduction rates of diabetes, hypertension as well as cardiovascular diseases. For example, it has been recently reported in a newly published article that the number of cases dead due to ischemic heart attack in America was sharply declinedin 2016 compared to the previous year. An this is associated with the increased amount of time US citizens spent on excerises along with dropping rate of smoking. Not until we started taking up sport such as football, tennis, badimton, … do we notice how much time we have wasted on other detrimental activities like playing fames, surfing on facebook. In addition, it is also highly likely that doing physical exercise can improve not on;y our shape but also sharpen our mind.
I, in particular, think that all age groups should do and enjoy sports as it is a healthy way to enjoy our lives. Particularly when it comes to the era of fast food industry and computerizes revolution where people consume products rich in fat and spend all day sitting beside computers or ipad. It is, admittedly, said to deterierate not only our health but also our mutual relationships. Thus, taking up any type of sports and doing it regularly are highly recommended in order to maintain a good healthy life.
By the way of conclusion, T here once reaffirm my support for spending time on physical activities. Our planet residents would only get better in terms of health outcomes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, in particular, kind of, such as, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98461538462 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72470695719 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649230769231 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3554375955 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2941176471 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150567499218 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451950085094 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038206922515 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876685765146 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025622888931 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.