Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Human basic needs are necessary for people to live a healthy life. It has argued by a significant number of individuals that public parks are valuable in community, while others consider these locations can be utilized in other projects, like, housing to accommodate the ever-increasing population. In my opinion, health care should be the prime focus of the state, thus more public parks are in prerequisite.
Public parks benefit society in various ways, exercise and yoga activities are prominent in such places and these tasks help us in improving the health care system. Thus to make an environment healthier public parks are an essential need. These places also benefit society as a platform to make people relax. In India, the government spend a major portion of their development budget in constructing public parks in the locality to minimize the pollution of the city traffic. The rising pollution levels demand more plants in the locality, therefore I believe that the major proportion of the funds should be distributed in public parks construction and renovations.
In addition to this, residential complex are high in demand to allocate the rising population, therefore the government should construct buildings to accommodate as many as possible families. The government planning should reflect the management of the urban and rural regions accordingly so that maximum people can be accommodated in the limited space. For example, city residence is often high in cost as compared with rural regions because of the more number of individuals in urban regions, therefore the government should utilize funds to support the basic necessities for the people.
In conclusion, although the lack of availability of homes is a quite common issue in the urban regions and it required dire attention from the government. But I believe that a healthy life is pivotal for any creature on this world, hence the state must make more projects of public parks to control the pollution levels in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...us in improving the health care system. Thus to make an environment healthier public...
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Line 5, column 557, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ent should utilize funds to support the basic necessities for the people. In conclusion, altho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24534161491 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87582502675 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527950310559 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0372654818 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.923076923 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161172284134 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570773605181 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235338852475 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974107797988 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225522369588 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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