A country's future depends on its young people. Therefore, it is argued that the government should invest heavily in its youth. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by some individuals that state must spend money on youngsters of the nation because of the country’s forthcoming hang on them. I agree and believe that the presence of the younger generation has an essential role in various fields and without youth, these fields are incompetent for any nation.
Firstly, youth participation in nations building is essential to growing the nation. There are a plethora of reasons why youth participation is a must to build the nation strong. Firstly, in an army where youths are required most and without army support no nation can develop self-defence and control their law and order. Secondly, in sports, youngsters are needed most to participate in different games and win games in the name of the nation, which brings pride and honour for the country. For instance, Australia is the richest nation in sports because they encourage their children in games participation at a very young age.
Secondly, youngsters are considered the backbone of a nation. The economy of a nation and industrial development depends on qualified and trained youngsters. Presence of specialists such as doctors and engineers are highly required in any nation to support the health and industrial sector of a nation. In other words, without these young individuals, no nation can stay competent and strong for upcoming generations as this young talent in future will become a scientist and work for the development of society in many ways. As per the survey, India and China are the most competitive nations in the upcoming world and they invest almost 70 per cent of its budget in young individuals.
In conclusion, the youth requirement is most in any country because of the above-mentioned reasons, therefore, the government must invest in young individuals’ to become a strong and competent nation in various field.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...of reasons why youth participation is a must to build the nation strong. Firstly, in an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17880794702 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99566957899 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506622516556 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.267712938 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.307692308 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123864413896 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468885485923 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435299946268 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921726895779 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434764295947 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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