Although more and more people are reading the news on the internet, most people still prefer reading the news in a newspaper. What are your views?
People hold different opinions about whether a newspaper or reading the news on the internet is better. I believe reading the news on the internet is much more convenient as it also offers more than just news.
Firstly, a newspaper mostly has limited information, as most newspapers mainly concentrate on a city or tri-state area and there is a different newspaper for each city. As the major source of income for the newspaper companies is the advertisements, they take up good portion of the newspaper. Secondly, no customizations can me made in terms of the size of the font printed in the newspaper or the quality or the pictures. Furthermore, since the newspapers are largely made with recycled paper, quality of the paper itself is not great and the size of the newspaper can be hard for some people to manage.
On the other hand, reading the news on the internet has much more to offer such as the amount of information available on the internet is enormous as compared to the newspaper. Search engines on the internet like "Google" gives us unprecedented access to news on any part of the word just at the click of a button. On top of that, much more customizations can be made according to one's interest or liking regarding the size of the font or quality of the pictures and we can even watch live or recorded videos of anything happening anywhere in the world. Internet also allows us to access all that information at any time of the day without going into the trouble of carrying a newspaper around.
To conclude, I strongly believe reading the news on the internet is far more easier and amusing than reading the newspaper and it will gain even more popularity in the future.
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, such as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74161073826 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85394546716 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493288590604 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.7457785938 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.454545455 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311131779152 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134860678882 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134461533754 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243858009646 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1475098449 0.056905535591 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.