Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
arts have faced many kinds of vandalism. Because , nowadays people are concentrating white color jobs. Mostly the new generations had demolished arts and arts related activities since last decades.in my opinion the Government should more concentrate and approve more financial support to improvement of multifarious arts activities such as drawing, painting, and internal designs etc.
Some people think that arts plays an important role of making structure of a country. Moreover some arts are main income of some counties because its attracts many tourists and researchers there . Some arts have ravishing beauty and presenting a peaceful mind for visitors.
Then also many people diverted their mind to other field like science , nuclear technologies, merchandise and researching because these profession give more income than other profession. Secondly, societies are moving more sophisticated nowadays.so that parents crumpled their child to concentrate only in educational subject such as physics , chemistry, biology and mathematics. So that children are not getting enough time to concentrate other extra activities.
In my point of view, any kinds of arts are equally prominent to other school subjects. The arts can improve economy of each nation all over the world. So that the government should revitalize arts in school levels and people should conduct awareness programme to societies. Through this programme ,we can improve our knowledge about ARTS.
To conclude, Arts plays an backbone of each nation. It express the beauty of culture and religion of one nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64853556485 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86361211557 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635983263598 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.3107041375 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188591786625 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633330322063 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410828587972 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101271515718 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217815665333 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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