Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology, and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
Although art is an important element of one's culture, in recent times, it is losing significance in the society due to other booming streams such as science, technology, and management. This essay will discuss the causes for downfall in arts as a career and propose possible solutions to curb this.
There are a plethora of elements that contribute to sinking of arts, an important one is the meager monthly income. A student spends a substantial amount as a fee to pursue education in arts, but the salary received is very minimal. In contrast, domains like technology or business provide high paying jobs even for an average student. To combat this problem, better pay ratio should be maintained between arts and other streams. As a result, a significant number of artists show interest in opting it as a career.
Another cardinal factor in low turn out for arts as a career is the paucity of career opportunities. Accordingly, only kids from affluent families afford this as they have financial resources to conduct an exhibition and promote their aesthetic art work. Conversely, every second job opportunity in the job market belongs to either of science, technology, and business, which encourages middle-class students to choose for financial stability. To alleviate this problem, if there are more awareness campaigns about importance of arts in the society, then it promotes culture and creates ample opportunities. Overall, it will increase the respect for artistic souls.
In conclusion, lack of monetary rewards and limited employment avenues are the vital causes for down-slide of arts as a career. However, this can be minimized by a good pay scale and promotional campaigns to generate more opportunities to artistic people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...Although art is an important element of ones culture, in recent times, it is losing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, conversely, however, if, second, so, then, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24285714286 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9440011646 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.431932618 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155218243159 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495376545875 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336916617887 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095213192491 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318814961773 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.