Art play pivotal role in country culture. Owing to modern technology,advancement and growing business field has made it disappeared.people rapidly decreasing interest in art. And following many different skills which have better eating options. Let's discuss what reasons and how could overcome this solution.
Every person prefer to choose science and technology related fields.todays innovation has changed human life. Parents opt medical subject for better future of their children. Very little of them learn art and craft.high standard living and huge earing is only available for doctor,businessman and scientists.educated person like to setup own business according to their qualification and earn good profit.
To turn on art point in past time people had not facilities to achieve higher education and lack of advancement is other reason. Young generation learn art skill by their elders. They felt happy and satisfied with minimum earning. Because they just wanted to fulfill their necessary needs. In modern life this artistic skill going to select by fewer people. Only those learning who are interested.
Art is also part of culture and tradition.So individuals and government should do something to encourage youngster to learn these skills. It would put bad affect on culture.free classes should be provided to poor children. Art subject should be available for additional subject in school so that, interested children could take it.
At last we can say that although,Other fields provide secure earing and life style. But we should not forget those skills which are combined with past.it is part of our ancestors life. So it is essential to keep them alive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , advancement
...ntry culture. Owing to modern technology,advancement and growing business field has made it ...
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Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...creasing interest in art. And following many different skills which have better eating options...
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Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...kills which have better eating options. Lets discuss what reasons and how could over...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to art', 'to be'
Suggestion: to art; to be
...eir children. Very little of them learn art and craft.high standard living and huge...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , businessman
...huge earing is only available for doctor,businessman and scientists.educated person like to ...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: CAN_SETUP[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
...man and scientists.educated person like to setup own business according to their qualifi...
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Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ood profit. To turn on art point in past time people had not facilities to achieve hi...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to art', 'to be'
Suggestion: to art; to be
...is other reason. Young generation learn art skill by their elders. They felt happy ...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ppy and satisfied with minimum earning. Because they just wanted to fulfill their neces...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...t is also part of culture and tradition.So individuals and government should do so...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...to learn these skills. It would put bad affect on culture.free classes should be provided...
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Line 9, column 33, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Other
...it. At last we can say that although,Other fields provide secure earing and life s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45593869732 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10255888112 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685823754789 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8857427208 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9473684211 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7368421053 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.894736842105 7.06120827912 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184910748358 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487120849731 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424952660111 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902270437774 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422469195465 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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