Youngster are nation builder.working person put efforts to enhance the economic growth of country. Some people think its good for teenagers to do part time jobs while studying.other argue that they need to concentrate on academic study.
It is beneficial for pupils to involve in jobs when they free. Firstly, they learn to become independent and how to manage things.They use money only on essiental things.doing jobs in different sectors,create sense of maturity,punctuality,displine and budgeting.in rainy day they don't feel to worry.student increase their ability and experience if they do skill work.
It's has some negative point as well. Adolescent are not mature enough to make decision of life. Sometime they waste their valuable time on earning money instead of giving attention towards study. They become weak in academic subject. Owing to this,might they fail and loose good score. It's create problem in higher education admission in reputed college and universities. Difficult situation arise to get handsome salary jobs.
Developed countries,many student take interest to earn money. A reason behind,there study is not much hard as compare to India. They don't give homework to put pressure on children. So they have free time to choose their work. Secondly it's depend on mind ability. Some are not able to handle both of task in minor age. They should care to study only. Because education is necessary and work is optional.
At last, we could say it should be individual decision .we should not force them to do. It put bad effect on their intellectual ability. Earing is good for financial status.teenagers should not compel to work if they can not handle it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22509225092 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20028116574 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645756457565 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.2239655087 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3636363636 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3181818182 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.40909090909 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116868341484 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331170433429 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504799162434 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739027921569 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494362742055 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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