Dear sir,
Iam writing this letter to notify problem would be occur because of motorway is going to be construct soon. I read this news on local news paper published by local authority.
Firstly our area is residential. Many schools, public park ,houses and hospitals there.it would be more congested by traffic problem.it will not be safe for school children and old people.air pollution will be increase and natural beauty will be harm.
So I suggest to alter this motorway in empty area.no damage and disturbance will be create.owing to spacy area,easy to construct without giving any trouble to local people.
I hope you will think on my views.
Your truly,
Deep singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, Iam writing this letter to notify proble...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...nstruct soon. I read this news on local news paper published by local authority. Firstl...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s residential. Many schools, public park ,houses and hospitals there.it would be m...
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Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest altering'.
Suggestion: suggest altering
...nd natural beauty will be harm. So I suggest to alter this motorway in empty area.no damage a...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , easy
...bance will be create.owing to spacy area,easy to construct without giving any trouble...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 577.0 937.175257732 62% => OK
No of words: 113.0 206.0 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10619469027 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2603904387 3.78020617076 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57818459188 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 127.690721649 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.725663716814 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 166.5 290.88556701 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1626478497 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4285714286 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346962020307 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130180653312 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576059394627 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172960574524 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188030048778 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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