The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Cardiovascular disorders and other health problems are more likely to increase those days which is directly affecting the number of healthy people who is becoming less those days. In fact, this is a result of several factors and the major ones are the type of diet and the sedentary life style.
Starting with the type of diet, our parents used to eat healthy foods since they used to cultivate vegetables and fruit in their garden which is not applicable today. Consequently, we are reducing the number of chemicals and preserving the nutriment that are crucial for the body tone. Moreover, most of woman today work hence they don't have enough time to cook so most of the time they order fast foods such as pizza or burgers or they tend to make easy recipes that contains a high amount of fat and carbohydrates .Therefore we are increasing the unhealthy foods during our daily live which is affecting our health negatively.
Moving on to the second major factor which also considered as important as the first one. Sedentary life style which almost found in every home since most of our jobs is operated by sitting on the computer. The average of working hours per day is 8 that mostly spent in the office. In addition, we used to walk or take our bicycles to reach our work. Today with the easy accessibility of the public transportation and the availability of cars our movements are very little. Moreover, and since most of our time is spent at work as a result we are not able to be a member at the gym and practice some physical exercises that can help a lot.
To sum up, I totally agree the number of healthy population is decreasing and this due to several factors that are related to our life style such as food and physical exercises.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62179487179 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54185056081 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3720272709 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.166666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0673977702294 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258002601837 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238279776027 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490060198234 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240003693597 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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