In school life, the young generation don't concentrate much on doing sports or improving your health, which will cause a number of drawbacks on their health. In my view, to prevent this issue from happening, sporting exercises should be obliged for students of all ages.
There are a number of reasons why the adolescents should pay attention to sports. First and foremost, playing sports is very helpful, when people play sport, they will have more energy to do a lot of things. Moreover, in these days, the majority of children are always sitting in front of the computer, which can lead to several diseases such as obesity or even heart disease. Therefore, enroll in a sporting practice will be a suitable ways of spending spare-time and it's also a good opportunity to have physical health training.
Another reason is doing sports give the juveniles the feeling of relaxing. Because of the intensity of schoolwork, a lot of students, especially with whom are studying at university, are stressful and may cause a quantity of mental illness such as depression or even committing suicide. However, there is a potential solution to get rid of these negative effects is developing sporting spirits. To be more precise, schools, which have monthly sporting events not only helping children healthier, but also giving them a chance to distress by making new friends and have a close-knit relationship with teachers and teammates.
In conclusion, although there are several problems caused by studying in an intense way, doing sports is necessary because not only the benefits it has but also sporting time can nurture their talents. So in my opinion, governments and school should make physical education as a compulsory subject instead of putting too much theoretical knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15862068966 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7705432015 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624137931034 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4033373181 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260750181936 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869995646473 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444015276876 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157326006926 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307128594336 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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