being a celebrity such as famous film start or sports personality brings problem as well benefits
do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems
Being popular as a sportsman, a musician, a politician or a film star can be beneficial but may be problematic sometimes. In my opinion, I think it brings about more trouble for them than some favors.
To start with, famous personalities enjoy a protocol wherever they go, as everyone feels the honor to be with them and as a benefit for their business or company. For example, they are invited as a chief guest at different programs that are organized for the fundraising or for the inauguration of any essential project or business. In addition, they get favored when they visit any place for entertainment or passing time with their family. For instance, once I went to a family resort where I saw a famous cricketer with his family. The resort management left no stone unturned to serve him, they even refused to charge him as he was a star.
n the flip side, they face severe calamities in their hard times in terms of media trials as in such situations they are prone to the bitter question from media which is a really tough time for them. Moreover, when they are at the peak of their career they are easy envied by the haters or competitors as they are always trying to harm them by spreading rumors about them. Furthermore, one bad performance can lead to their downfall as haters make the most of this situation. To illustrate, a well- known Indian cricket team captain when failed to win world cup semi-final he was brutally criticized and then lead to resign as a captain although he had contributed to the most winnings of the team.
In conclusion, it is evident that a well- known celebrity can enjoy some benefits but it can be even more harmful to them when having a bad time or a decline in their career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: N
...used to charge him as he was a star. n the flip side, they face severe calamit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58387096774 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64628025113 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567741935484 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3943033132 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.416666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145684859021 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574827821913 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723212414253 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123315009492 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921534427094 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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