A country's economy is valued on the basis of its young generations, because the future of a nation is in the hands of this people. A good productive human resource is the most valuable asset of a regime. It is the main reason why countries are investing largely on human resource development.
First of all, behind every successful country or company there should a couple of you bloods. They are the one's who has the capability of facing any kind challenges which comes in their daily work routine. Secondly, they are always a go getter type of persons, anything we toss at them they will immediately grab that opportunity and prove what they are cable of. Thirdly, we can see how countries value his young people by looking in to the new strategies adopted by the different nations. For instance, we can see there is sharp twist in the employment strategies of countries like USA and Australia. They recently changed there migration rules to ensure the jib safety of their own citizens. Otherwise, they may loose their productive work force since they look to other countries for job opportunities, if they don't get what they desire in their home country. This scenario is known by the name 'brain drain.
The best way to invest in resources by identifying the relevant fields which contributes to the overall growth of the country's economy. In this sense government should give importance to investing technology and tourism after human resource development. Those are the sectors which growing at a steep pace.By conducting research and developments in this field will help the country earn an superiority in these fields.
In conclusion, we can see that youths are the main driving force behind the success of country, so government should focus on the well being of these people. In addition the nation has to give adequate importance to other growing sectors too.
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- the pie chart show the electricity generated in Germany and france from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. summarize the information by selecting and reporting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 68
- The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. 67
- Some people think that travel is necessary to learn about other nations, others, however think that tv and internet is best way to learn discuss both views and give your opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e future of a nation is in the hands of this people. A good productive human resourc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nes who has the capability of facing any kind challenges which comes in their dai...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...their own citizens. Otherwise, they may loose their productive work force since they ...
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Line 3, column 817, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ountries for job opportunities, if they dont get what they desire in their home coun...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... The best way to invest in resources by identifying the relevant fields which co...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...e sectors which growing at a steep pace.By conducting research and developments in...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...n this field will help the country earn an superiority in these fields. In conc...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...s on the well being of these people. In addition the nation has to give adequate importa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94620253165 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68513171046 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2476618727 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222441172466 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068502681675 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750879513885 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128612382523 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823439236426 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.