The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organisation To what extent do you agree or disagree

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The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organisation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although many people believe that working in multinational companies is the most appropriate way to know about their culture: while, I think, nevertheless, it is a good way, but not the best way, thus I disagree with the statement. My inclination is justified in the ensuing paragraphs.

To begin with, however, MNCs give a chance to visit other countries and that in turn, provide an opportunity to know their culture and understand traditions. But it is not necessary that you would get selected for an ex-pats project. Besides, this is not the only way to know other civilizations one can go on vacations or for studies if they really want to know the customs of another country.

Further, when we go as an expat, our main aim would be to serve our company and expand it; thus, we would be indulged in working day and night. Our area of exploration would be limited to our office space or around the place we live in. Whereas, when we go on vacations, we go with the purpose to expand our knowledge about that nation and the lifestyle of the people living there. Also, we spend maximum time roaming around, meeting different people and talking to them to know about their civilization.

Another good way of international exposure is by studying abroad, this way one can see life from two different points of view, one from teachers point and another from classmates' eyes. This not only gives a better understanding but also tells the different aspects of that country. For instance, in India, a teacher might say we celebrate the Diwali festival, because, on that auspicious day God Rama came back home after completing exile of 14 years, on the other hand, students may say it's a Hindu new year, which is also true. Thus, we get encountered with two separate views where both are true.

To encapsulate, undoubtedly expatriate is one of the good options to expand our geographical horizon, but other options are also available, and which one is best completely depends on one’s preference. In my view, holidaying is the best option as we go there with the purpose to understand their culture and tradition.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 489, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, i think, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8301369863 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73264289864 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545205479452 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6555283171 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.533333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164849266826 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541738950907 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561191924977 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105077928561 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624150629945 0.056905535591 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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