big money or job satisfaction?
The importance of job satisfaction, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of big salary has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. it can be said that high salary is prominent, however, some people concerned about work satisfaction. this essay will elaborate how and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why job satisfaction is primary, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that health is wealth. According to research conducted by Western Sydney University, 92% of it employees are not satisfied with their job even though they have good annual salary package. thus, work satisfaction can play a vital role to mental health, personal and family life.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that big salary is also significant for the good living as there are innumerable reasons for that, but the most predominant one lies in the fact that money rules the world. For Instance, a research conducted by experts reveals that a country with good GDP has more happily populated communities. thus, big salary can play vital role to happiness.
Approaches to deal with problems of the topic are numerous, but the most effective one is that one should find a plum job, which is not impracticable and unattainable but comprehensible and feasible.
From what have been discussed above, it can be concluded that, the impact of the job satisfaction is prominent, although the way idea should be well handled.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13127413127 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90661027622 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590733590734 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0549922891 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238918019326 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701959657802 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473722245237 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108346772178 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365694444422 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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