In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old
people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has
to pay for this care.
Who should be responsible for our old people?
In Britain, the elder people go to Old-age homes to spend the rest of their lives. The question is, should they live this phase of the life all by themselves or is it the responsibility of the family to take care of them?
It is often seen that most of the families send their old parents or grandparents to Old-age Homes. One of the many reasons is the belief that they do not have enough time to look after the elderly. Secondly, the young generation believes that their old parents are surrounded by like-minded people at home-stay which makes spending time easier. Lastly, they have nurses for their help 24x7 and hence, do not need to bother themselves with household chores. However, there may be cases when that the nurses might not take full responsibility of the elderly and could not be trusted all the time.
Even though this appears to be a convenient option for the young children, they often seem to forget or rather ignore the fact that all elders need is love and affection from their family and children in this last phase of life. Moreover, at times, there is negligence in terms of the financial support from the family and the government of Britain ends up paying the dues to facilitate the poor, old people. In my opinion, we, as a part of young generation, are responsible for taking care of our parents, exactly as they did when we were growing up. It is completely unacceptable to leave your parents helpless at this age and that too depending on some strangers for their responsibility.
To conclude, the parents should always be with you irrespective of their age or phase of life. A rather better option is to have a help come at your home than to send your parents to an unknown place to let them live with the strangers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and could not be trusted all the time. Even though this appears to be a conveni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, lastly, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60828025478 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54464976045 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535031847134 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7410987194 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330177373068 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112214314878 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362796238949 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202317370113 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610833159975 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.