In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
We all know that at the end of our journey we need someone to take of us.Some go to live with other old in orphanage, and others stay with their families. This nursing home gets paid other by government or by a family member. Some people think that taking care of old people is the responsibility of the governments it must pay all the expanses and others believe that families should pay these expanses to take care of their old parents.
First, the majority of people agree with the idea that the government should pay the expenses of this care. First, Britain people believe that the taxes that they are paying for the government monthly is the guarantee for their lives when they get old. Second, for the English men he thinks that the government is responsible towards them and should take care of their lives when they get old. For example, the government should offer full medical treatments for old people and find for them shelters to sleep and eat like orphanage or nursing home with older people where there are nurses. In my opinion, I agree with this point since we are paying taxes and fees for the government to secure our lives.
On the other hand, several Britain citizens disagree with this point since they think that the money should be spent for other important plans. First, many prefer from the government not to pay a big amount of money to take care of old people since they can benefit from it by developing their country and build healthy environment. Second, some think that each person must take care of their old parents at their own expense, where the old person need care and love from his family. For example, in my country people pay taxes for the government to improve the economy and develop the country, not to spend them on old people. From my side, I disagree with these points and I think that governments should assist and take care of old people.
As a conclusion, governments or families should pay for this care, that's why there is a conflict with this view, some people are with and others are against this point. Therefore, from my point of view I believe that the government should provide houses and treatments for old people on their own expense, so people will feel that when they get old there future is secured and be showered with the love of their family members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62077294686 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25114682383 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.3961352657 0.561755894193 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0744569204 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.533333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.588817203256 0.244688304435 241% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256461475863 0.084324248473 304% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770814727428 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.427210673982 0.151304729494 282% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730335658682 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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