Many developed countries facing problem of growing old age population. After working for long, they prefer to stay old age home where they get medical services and same age people to spend their time at ease. Government played vital role to established such kind of place and spend a lot money for their peaceful life but children should not forget their responsibility. In this essay, i explain that family is more accountable for their parent's need and must spend money to take care of him.
Even thought, many opportunities and facilities has been given by government to senior citizen to spend their life after retirement at common place where they get same aged friends and health services on time, but the primary responsibility to take care of their parents is lies with kids only. Elder needs love and care from their love ones more than facilities they are being providing in old age homes. There are various studies shown that parents who live with children are more happy and healthy rather than live in place with same aged people.
There are many incidents has been seen where kids have no time or has to go to different places for their jobs. They cannot support or carry parents along with. In that case older's sibling and kids are more responsible for their better living hood rather than government arrangements. Experienced people should not be forced to accept temporary arrangement if they have kids. They have right to live at comfortable place without any hassle for which youngster must provide that environment to them, they can use government aided places but should be responsible for all expenses for their folks.
In conclusion, we can say that despite of having good services and facilities providing by government to take care of grey hair people, they are much more attached and required maximum support from their family only, specially young ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, as to, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97476340694 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46245175795 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545741324921 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7999751975 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.307692308 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266600083517 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102450048267 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399706851499 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166355175343 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052460322808 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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