In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
As people get old, question of taking their responsibility arises; even if they are sent to old homes, this question still sustains. In old homes, either government or the family has to pay their bills; however, I believe that despite all the complexities of our society, old people should be taken care by their families. Their expenses should be borne by their offspring, and besides family, governments should fix some allowances to their senior citizens.
In the past, family system was tremendously strong that such questions did not arise, but these days family structure has transformed massively that providing financial care to parents has become a hot issue. In my opinion, offspring should not abandon their parents and should realize their value. They should support their parents financially as they did so during their childhood and adolescence. Although lifestyle has altered completely as people have become more self oriented now, opposite from the past , members of the family can still finance their parents and grandparents even if they have to live in old homes. They should not abdicate from their responsibility at all.
However, it does not mean that senior citizens may be left in the lurch by the governments just because they are looked by their families. Since old people have served their country by working and spending their lives in, therefore, governments should allocate funds to them so that they could bear their expenditures and live independently. Even if a government cannot sponsor its senior citizens fully, then it can offer them some allowances and subsidized medical care.
To conclude, just like traditional family norms, it is the main responsibility of offspring to arrange money for expenditures of medicine, food and others for old family members. Governments can enhance this family sponsorship by funding and reducing the cost of facilities required to old people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...such questions did not arise, but these days family structure has transformed massiv...
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Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...elf oriented now, opposite from the past , members of the family can still finance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, therefore, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28758169935 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78231958894 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552287581699 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2873548567 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269924813621 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108140202573 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550162823543 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183120206208 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442950343744 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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