Old people requires a lot of care and it becomes important to have someone always to attend to them such as nurses for the elderly. In countries like Britain few elderly people prefer living in a home for the elderly which is funded by the government. while some might believe that paying for such care is the responsiblity of the family, In my opinion the government should pay for the care of their elderly population.The arugument is supported by stating some of the reason why I believe so.
First and foremost, there are variations in each family's financial situation. Some family might be able to take care of their parents or guardians while some might not be in a financial situation to do so, for instance if someone does not have a job or might have lost their job and if there is a need for an urgent hospitalisation it can be a huge expense and not being in a financial situation to help will put the parents in a greater risk, meanwhile if the government will pay for their care such risks could be avoided as the government will have funds to help them.
Example: A lot of old people will have paid their taxes and other medical insurances when they were young and government in countries like the United states of America and Canada use these taxes to pay for the care of their elderly population.
In conclusion, family and the government should take care of the elderly citizen but since government can be more reliable and are financially capable, they should pay for such care instead of the families.
- In Britain when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them Sometimes the government has to pay for this care Who do you think should pay for this care the government or the family Give 73
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student However there are many problems with this arrangement and you find itvery difficult to work Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college In your letter describe the situat 73
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student However there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college In the letter describe the situati 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...erly which is funded by the government. while some might believe that paying for such...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...or the care of their elderly population.The arugument is supported by stating some ...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...n.The arugument is supported by stating some of the reason why I believe so. First and f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o, for instance if someone does not have a job or might have lost their job and i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.625 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60670839052 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477941176471 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.031246186 49.4020404114 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.714285714 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8571428571 20.7667163134 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338956031687 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173151023059 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749086375087 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234757285548 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062937516207 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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