building fence
I would recommend the city hall to establish a fence around the lake because under no circumstances should the ducks be shot.
Even though getting rid of the ducks might appeal to particular individuals, building a fence would provide an acceptable and less extreme solution.
Many runners deem duck as the real culprit for the messy condition of the running track. I have witnessed many residents using their rifles to shoot ducks to keep them away from residential areas, so Setting a fence would ultimately ensure the safety of the duck.
The lake is a relaxing spot for the community around it. Last week, I took my kids to the lake for a lovely afternoon picnic, and they enjoyed feeding the ducks with bread crumbs. Not only would eliminating the ducks create a natural disaster for the environment around the lake, but it also kills the lake as a target for family picnics.
Considering these reasons, I believe the fence is the best option available. Having a fence would keep the area clean while protecting the animals.
Again, this is my personal opinion, and I would support whatever decision the city makes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding community'?
Suggestion: the surrounding community
...uck. The lake is a relaxing spot for the community around it. Last week, I took my kids to the lake ...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'eliminate'
Suggestion: eliminate
...ducks with bread crumbs. Not only would eliminating the ducks create a natural disaster for...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... lake as a target for family picnics. Considering these reasons, I believe the...
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Line 13, column 19, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ecting the animals. Again, this is my personal opinion, and I would support whatever decision ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90625 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52822607441 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4790852282 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182644151231 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724019148831 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822677614373 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10211207104 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930959475644 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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