With the increasing population and needs of people, car ownership is increasing at a rapid pace. Due to increase in number of cars on road, huge traffic jams are there which is creating traffic disturbance. Earlier are number of cars were increasing but at a marginal rate, but now increase has been drastic in last thirty years.
Car population is directly linked to increasing population and need of people but it has also become more of a status symbol nowadays. Despite of the requirement, people tend to spend heavy amount just to show their status to the society. Number of cars in a family in approximately equal to number of major members in a family. It is very well known that people feel safe in cars than any other mode of travelling. Cars given sense of ownership, while travelling to office by car, one can leave from home any time as per convenience. Despite of the advantages, major cities of world has become a big traffic jam. In India, it takes approx 10 minutes to cross a light in Delhi. This car population is increasing in such a manner that it is becoming tough for even traffic police to control.
Various measures are being taken by government of every country to curb this problem. In Singapore, there are various rules to buying a car as there is huge tax levied on purchase of cars. Even number of cars is also limited to each family. Government issues approval to buy car only to those people, for which it thinks that actual need is there after proper evaluation. This method is really working in Singapore and there is less traffic jam as compared to another cities. Various steps like this can be taken by other countries and various amendments should be done as physiology of people of different cities is different. Importance should be given to public transportation, it should be cheap and clean so people can shift from cars to public transport.
To reciprocate, car population is a increasing problem and it is causing lots of pollution as well. It should be controlled as early as possible. Government alone would not be able to do it, general public should understand its implications and should support the cause. Various awareness programs should be launched to make people understand the implications of car population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
...for which it thinks that actual need is there after proper evaluation. This method is reall...
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Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t. To reciprocate, car population is a increasing problem and it is causing lo...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...nment alone would not be able to do it, general public should understand its implications and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81329923274 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72551726203 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514066496164 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2244365884 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5454545455 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7727272727 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296805328614 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865516167459 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433852723024 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177403145505 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578178081894 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.