Caring for children is important in any society. All parents should be required to take childcare courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Caring for children plays a more and more significant role in the present society as the future of human beings is on their shoulder. Some people thus advocate that every parent should enroll in childcare courses. I am inclined to agree with this suggestion as those courses may help parents better prepared for taking care of children’s education and safety.
Safety is a key factor of childcare and taking courses undoubtedly enhances parents’ ability on childcare. For instance, in China, over handerous of children are injured due to incorrect babysitting manner every year. The reason behind this occasion is that their parents are not equipped with proper skills for taking care of children. If all parents are forced to participate in related classes, their children will have a lower likelihood to get accidentally hurt. Therefore, the significant role such courses plays in children’s safety is apparent.
Courses in childcare also teach the parents an optimal manner of their children’s education, which is with parallel importance as children’s safety. A higher level of education provides more opportunities for one to hunt a job nowadays, and this can not be achieved without parents’ efforts in his early ages. Reports have shown that the people’s education level are with large dependence on whether their parents are educated. It is thus clear that childcare courses is necessary as they can emphasize the importance of education to parents.
As discussed above, it is safe to draw the conclusion that there is an urgent need of methods to equip parents with proper skills in terms of children’s safety and education. Delivering childcare courses can be an optimal way to alleviate this issue and all parents should be required to participate in such courses and demonstrate their eligibility for taking good care of their children.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37583892617 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05748713118 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513422818792 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0396277121 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297628598057 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114426439776 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648280891687 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213466917554 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507463133398 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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